Rashaad Young, Economic Development Group

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Posted by Go To 2040 Staff at 12/12/2008 03:25:54 PM |

You chose a great issue to tackle, and the approach you take is interesting. I though overall the thing that most needed work was your focus. It would be great if you could be more specific on the problem you're addressing, the possible consequences, and the solutions.
Posted by: Elizabeth Lopez ( Email: ) at 1/9/2009 9:51 PM

I like your idea of beautification and how the community should give their say in what actually goes on. Maybe you can include more examples to makr it a stronger argument.
Posted by: Lynda Lopez ( Email: ) at 1/10/2009 7:38 AM

The ideas that you came up with are good because they are realistic. You just need to watch your spelling.
Posted by: Brianna Howard ( Email: ) at 1/10/2009 3:13 PM